WWW comments
-good use of shots
-follows conventions
-good appeal to target audience
-good use of location
-sells the product
-good use of costume
EBI comments -things to improve
-pay more attention to detail e.g takes clothes off door/ps3 boxes etc
-make the bedroom appear more girly e.g perhaps hang a dress on the door/flowers
-sound effects to make it seem like nightime/dreaming e.g wind blowing curtain/owl sound /birds
-start scene off with a clock to appear at midnight/close up of face/ waking up or eyes opening
- perhaps a voice over in french
-shot of door opening into dream world
-first and last scene in black and white/perfume appear in colour /dream world in colour
-also lighting /film in daylight
-close up of face/body/eyes /hands/perfume bottle/look desirable for the audience/sell urself with the perfume
-panning shots,still shots/tell the story/
-INTERTEXUALITY -FAIRY TALES
-Media language-C
-Conventions-C
-Attention to detail-D/C
-Creativity-C
-Technicial proficiency-C
